After twenty years old we become adults. It is obvious that the most of their lives are spent in workplace. To do great job employees have to work in good conditions. In this essay we will discuss main elements of job satisfaction and views of workers.
We have some basic points that influence job satisfaction. Firstly, many employees can’t concentrate on the work because of noise or wearily. This can be dependent on atmosphere. A good idea would be making an atmosphere in the workplace where they can work without irritation and diversion.
The second factor that can influence people’s job satisfaction is salary. Money is a good way to increase their satisfaction. Employee will lose motivation for work without encouraging and additional rewards.
Last but not least, for workers important one is enjoying. People should start their job experience with profession that makes them happy. At the beginning, salary would be not so high, but by doing and showing their best, they will get great payment that they deserve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After twenty years old we become adults. It i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14117647059 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84795804953 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2384546246 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.4285714286 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260011822157 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834733136583 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735935001253 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159271163767 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563815383395 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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