Most of the world's urgent problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?
Excess population is a reason for majority of the critical issues exists in the world. In my opinion, I totally accede with this viewpoint. This essay will outline the direct relation of crucial issues with overpopulation in a conclusive way.
To begin with poverty and unemployment, Irrefutably these two major problems are directly impacted by overpopulation. For instance, In India population is growing day by day and opportunities in employment sector are less, Which result in poverty and low economy. Outcome of one recently conducted survey reveals that major reason is unawareness and uneducated people who have no family planning in advance.
Lastly, Environment is being deteriorated in crowded countries. Environmental pollution causes abundance of health issues and serious diseases. In this contemporary world, Where there is cutting edge technology making advancements day by day, People have become so much dependent on vehicles instead of walking or cycling. Everyone wants to save time, So the excess usage of cars, motorbikes, buses etc. is making the air quality very poor. Moreover, With industry revolution, Natural resources of water are being contaminated.
To recapitulate, The aforementioned provide plausible views about the topic. I believe that If government will take the initiative to spread awareness about these critical issues among people and educate them in an effective way then increase in population can surely be controlled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, moreover, so, then, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60986547085 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10290571714 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686098654709 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7940014471 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0527077220159 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171358132011 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029746066347 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0278289160248 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173585761794 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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