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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ard of living and educational facilities .However this, tendency pose a threat to ...
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Suggestion: However
...d of living and educational facilities .However this, tendency pose a threat to both ci...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...d of living and educational facilities .However this, tendency pose a threat to both ci...
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...ose a threat to both cities and villages . This essay shall delve into prime issue...
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...This essay shall delve into prime issues and suggest some solution to come out of...
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...ome solution to come out of this problem To pinpoint the paramount challenge on t...
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...burdened on resources and infrastructure .Apparently, which leads to rise many iss...
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Suggestion: Apparently
...rdened on resources and infrastructure .Apparently, which leads to rise many issues such a...
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...ng land acquisition illegal encroachment and creation of slums . Moreover, limite...
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...egal encroachment and creation of slums . Moreover, limited availability of water...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... threat to hazardous diseases and would leads to many waterborne diseases. What is mo...
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...o many waterborne diseases. What is more , continuous influx of people escalate po...
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...of people escalate pollution, population . This trend can leave imprints on villag...
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...or and workforce usher this circumstance . As a consequence lands become predicted...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and workforce usher this circumstance . As a consequence lands become predicted as...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...quence lands become predicted as barren in future . There are colossal ways and combat ...
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...nds become predicted as barren in future . There are colossal ways and combat th...
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...ion such as authorities must provide job opportunities at the hamlet so that regi...
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...ve easy access of jobs at their own area . To epitomize it , factories should be o...
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...jobs at their own area . To epitomize it , factories should be opened like sugar m...
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... is labor extensive service. As a result ,exodus of individuals stops . Another re...
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...As a result ,exodus of individuals stops . Another reinforcing, factor is provide ...
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...de effective linkage to city and village . Owing to fact it, would facilitate rura...
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...they can commute for work on daily basis . Thus, if above steps are taken appropri...
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..., if above steps are taken appropriately , this problem can be address some soluti...
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...his problem can be address some solution . In recapitulation , despite of copiou...
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...ress some solution . In recapitulation , despite of copious challenge face by bo...
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...n we can escape from its nasty effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27575757576 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91465120686 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.3745978423 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.357142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24764279197 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669507355631 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673763258803 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133765367886 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320978469663 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.