People have different views about who should be responsible for taking care of children when both parents have to work. While other relatives, such as grandparents, are able to undertake this task, I would argue that childcare services should be the preferred option.
On the one hand, those who believe that grandparents should look after their grandchildren may point to financial advantages and thoughtfulness. It is true that the cost of living rises considerably when a family has children. If they are cared for by their grandparents, parents do not have to pay for childcare services, which can alleviate the financial burden on both parents. Secondly, family members often have deep affection for their grandchildren, dedicating themselves to childcare, ensuring that parents can be confident that their children receive considerate care.
On the other hand, I support the idea that parents should send their children to childcare centers because of their professionalism and the well-being of grandparents. Regarding the former, people working in childcare services are well-educated and equipped to care for children of different ages. They possess the necessary skills not only to ensure that children are well looked after but also to facilitate comprehensive development. For example, at these centers, children can engage in various activities, including games, arts, and workouts, which are beneficial for their cognitive, mental, and physical health. As for the health of grandparents, they have spent their entire lives earning a livelihood and nurturing their children. If they have to look after their grandchildren, they could become stressed, and their health could deteriorate quickly because it is not an easy task.
In conclusion, while I understand the idea that grandparents could take care of children, I believe that childcare centers represent an ideal option as they can provide professional service and the elders need time for their old age.
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 78
- It is sometimes said that countries should produce all the food for their populations to eat and import as little as possible To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each other while others think that people are now more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject What are causes And what will be effects on society 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50163934426 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03196976143 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544262295082 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7015792189 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.076923077 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323229969815 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124710467262 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781500968264 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219597800907 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388737919022 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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