It is true that, in this contemporary era, opening new business are being done by youngsters at an unprecedented rate in all over the world instead of working for any organisation. Moreover, many big businesses are also supporting them like, financially. However, according to my perspective, there are some drawbacks which cannot be overlooked.
To commence with, there are overabundance points available on this. First and foremost, we have to handle everything in every field by ourselves which create pressure on people sometimes. Furthermore, people prefer to do work hard day and night for establishing their businesses in right direction and they do not give their time to their families and parents. Secondly, they do not get anything like, fixed salary, provident fund, bonus and so on which you can easily get in any job. Additionally, they have to confront all the loss by themselves. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested more than 58% self employed people do not give time to their families which is not good for children and families.
On the other hand, youngsters want to set up their own businesses or want to be self employed because of freedom. In addition, nobody can bound any rule on them like, dress code, working hours, e.t.c which people have to follow while working in any company and they can easily do whatever they want to do in their life. Another reason could be, everyone knows that business is the well of money through businesses we can generate high profit and be a rich man within a short period. For instance, my father he used to do job on a petrol pump as a salesman but after that he wanted to do something big that is why they established their own business and right now our position is good than past.
On a concluding note, although there are plenty of reasons where being a self employed is far better instead of doing job in any company, we cannot be overlooked drawbacks like, pressure of work, no fixed salary. Nevertheless, I, personally believe that if people will give their focus in business or in job they can perform better.
- Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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- Some think that students must travel to another country in order to learn its language and customs To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 78
- Some people think public libraries is necessary however others beleive that the public library is useless Dicuss both views and give your opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80716253444 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72195268186 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550964187328 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7969377905 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252096970239 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089158592532 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830712810649 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17459653969 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266818227237 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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