Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed.
These days, In the modern world, more and more people are innovating new things and trying their best to be self-employed rather than working for others. In this essay, the reasons for such trend and what will be the causes for such development are explained below.
On the first hand, I would like to make the point that due to lack of good job opportunities or dissatisfaction more and more working class people are moving towards self-reliant option and starting their own businesses. Countries where the basic fundamental property by which the system works are affected badly due to inflation and the supply has crossed the rate of demand with significant numbers. So, the people who once used to prefer doing jobs now starting their own startups. Secondly, the national governments are also supporting such steps and providing various concessions to people via different schemes to achieve the ultimate goal of creating revenue. For instance, after 2017, In India, the present government has decided that all the people who are planning to start their own business in any sector can do it, and the government will help for the growth of the business in various aspects.
On the other hand, there are many risks involved while planning for such a start. Many such companies have gone bankrupt in a less time span due to improper planning and execution. For instance, Paytm was one of the major companies in India; but, due to poor management, others have captured their customer base. Such improvement can only be executed in a nation where there is an adequate population because if everyone will start their own business and show reluctance to jobs then there will a huge shortage of manpower. Lastly, there is a possibility of wastage of time as well as money.
To conclude, I would say that such developments can really be a game changer but, at the same time, it demands proper calculations and hard work to achieve the goal. It can provide the success which people want but to achieve that one has to study the current trend of that particular region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88920454545 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60845428714 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3953773892 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.928571429 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211794663128 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069065986985 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756602066639 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147790177462 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112455707286 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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