Nowadays, more people prefer to communicate via text message and email instead of face to face.
Why do you think this is the best way?
When is face to face communication necessary
In the first paced world, the technological improvements have invented various methods of communication. More and more people nowadays favor to connect through these developments such as message, email, etc. This essay believes that contacting via these amenities is the best way to communicate on the countrary, face to face meetups are required for especial occasions such as important gatherings, events, etc.
Since the advancement of modern technology, communicating among people have seen a noteceable change.In other words, now, personnels can easily connect with their love ones in a blink of an eye even though they remain hunderds or thousands miles away. Otherwise, it may cost a fortune to impart personally as well as a large amount of time to travel there. In this busy world, once can easily text his family and friends with the help of a smartphone and some applications. Thus, the citizens around the world have come closer. To cite an example, many students studying abroad utilize messaging apps or gmail to communicate with their parents and enjoy day to day conversations. Thus, it is the best way for communication.
By contrast, these feature also reduce our humanitarian qualities as due to these mediums many tend to skip face to face conversations while living nearby. Although, developed medium of contacting are a blessing, they are not always convenient. Special get togethers such as reunions, marriages, etc are a must to join. These occasions not only increase our bonding but also boost our social skills to connect with others. Furthermore, various meetings for business or else are needed to be done in person, since there is a possibility of information leaks on online platfroms. For Instance, a plot of a recent flim was leaked online which declined its sale about 60%.
In this ever developing world, the usage of online platfroms and mobile to make contact with our love ones is the most user oriented method. Inspite of this worthwhile develpoment, face to face meetups are essential for certain occasions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ng people have seen a noteceable change.In other words, now, personnels can easily...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... such as reunions, marriages, etc are a must to join. These occasions not only increase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17717717718 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89577011927 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624624624625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9402934307 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.411764706 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23786799411 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643373340029 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921272660289 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152740905648 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841313444809 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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