Modern era of technology has started and everything now is done only by robots in home and as well as in work place. There are many advancements these days and increase of modern equipment resulting in usage of IOT and Artificial Intelligence applications. These had many effects in development. It has both positive and ill effects on the society.
Every coin had both faces and due to improvement in technology there is adverse effects in environment resulting in increase of radiation and extinction of many rare species. On the other hand, it made life on earth more happy and satisfying.
Due to the usage of sensors and AI in all fields people had no reason left to perform their home chores making everyone's life easy and more comfortable. In this busy society, there is no time for these things nowadays. This also improved technology and helped a lot for modernization of the society. People now use robots even to remember things and to find lost things. Cleaning, organizing and assembling every small work can be done through artificial machines. Even imagination is done through bio-sensors, there is a modern technology developed recently which can show the dreams that are dreamt while sleeping. In these way daily routine of people is adversely effected by modern technology.
In contrast this made life more comfortable than necessary which made people lazy. Everyone became couch potatoes with no work all day being addicted to mobile phones and other useless stuff. These made man get away from a healthy life style and also increased a lot of unknown diseases like obesity, constipation, etc. Due to the e-networks and other waves we use for communication and other necessary requirements, effect the climatic conditions adversely leading to many extinction of small bird species resulting in diversity in environment which is no good to the future of planet.
- The process shows how plants create food 78
- The topic is taken from Cambridge book of IELTS 9 writing task 1 test 3 The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feat 56
- Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child s education Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time Discuss both these views and give your opinion 84
- The graph below shows the information about languages 13 year old students in one school choose to study 73
- The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are adverse effects'?
Suggestion: there are adverse effects
...es and due to improvement in technology there is adverse effects in environment resulting in increase of...
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Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this way' or 'these ways'?
Suggestion: this way; these ways
...eams that are dreamt while sleeping. In these way daily routine of people is adversely ef...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ly effected by modern technology. In contrast this made life more comfortable than ne...
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Line 7, column 470, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun extinction seems to be countable; consider using: 'many extinctions'.
Suggestion: many extinctions
...limatic conditions adversely leading to many extinction of small bird species resulting in dive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1064516129 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84552151915 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1979583114 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969914812049 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324454526965 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359227061557 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584850304458 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269181626263 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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