It is irrefutable that these days parents are more possessive for their children's success and hence, they pressurise their kids to be succeed. In my opinion, such pressure put children themselves in the negative mindspace.
Firstly, due to the fact that competition has rose among youngsters in every aspects and thus, parents want their kids to be at the top of the list. However, pressurising offsprings would not help them to be successful instead it will take them to certain mental illness such as depression and anxiety. For instance, as per the recent survey conducted by education department 32% of students attempted suicide because of the pressure given by their parents. Secondly, another reason for forcing the kids to be succeed is due to the lack of employment. In other words, there is a vast competition in order to achieve employment and thus, if the child do not follow the path of success he/she might not be able to achieve a desire job.
On the other hand, there are some positive sides as well. Moreover, putting continuous pressure on them would help them to focus on the desire path and might useful to avoid unnecessary distractions. For example, when i was 12 years old, I was weak in mathematics but my mother continued to teach me maths even though I was unable to grasp those practical concepts, subsequently, in the exams I scored maximum marks as compare to other subjects.
To conclude, although there are positive developments, on the contrary, there several negative effects which kids might have to face.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to be at the top of the list. However, pressurising offsprings would not help t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98846153846 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75329549716 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6355989744 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.909090909 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.9090909091 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198541443283 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765677477469 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588689642973 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124273228903 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821357922273 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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