Usage of motor vehicles such as cars becoming more popular in current days due to people consider it as a self esteem need and there is lot of developments in cars to make them easy to drive.
There are many consequences of selecting cars as a transportation method. For example, if people start to shift from bicycles which are much eco-friendly method of transportation to cars, then the pollution levels also start to increase resulting in environmental problems. The above issue becomes even worse when it comes to motor traffic on roads.
Another effect of preferring cars is, people becoming inactive which results in physical issues and social problems such as not maintaining a healthy weight. This is because, drivers tend to sit in one place when driving a car for a long period of time without any physical movement which may cause weight increase.
However, there are few measures that can be taken to encourage general public to use bicycles instead of motor cars. One is, to include bicycles in public transport system. That is to provide bicycles in main points, so people can use them by paying a certain amount as a rent and get a token and then return it at a different point after usage. In this instance, users need not to invest in buying a bicycle, instead they use the publicly available ones at a small cost. Authorities can even provide a concessional rate for using public bicycles to motivate the riders. Moreover, a convenient bicycle path can be constructed in order for the riders to ride conveniently without any disturbances from other types of transportation methods. They can even make ride companions when travelling to work or school which improves the social element of the society.
In conclusion, it is always believed that usage of bicycles has more advantages than using cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...one place when driving a car for a long period of time without any physical movement which may...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...measures that can be taken to encourage general public to use bicycles instead of motor cars. ...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'invest'?
Suggestion: invest
...usage. In this instance, users need not to invest in buying a bicycle, instead they use t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92207792208 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77292496026 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3713457823 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326759754704 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111432852334 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666150053416 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147841962171 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876761062829 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.