Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Thanks to the development of technology that human interaction between each other has changed significantly. It influences people relationships in various ways, and in my opinion, this trend leads to both advantages and disadvantages.
Relationships among people have changed significantly in a more convenient way because of technology, especially in business, education and social lives. Firstly, Skype and Emails allow workers to respond instantaneously whenever there are any important announcements or requirements. Secondly, the social-networking sites and online platforms contribute to the development of online classes, which connect teachers and students who stay far away from each other. Finally, thanks to those modern gadgets that social beings now can expose themselves and make more friends, even overseas ones than in the past.
On the one hand, the effects of technology on people’s lives have brought various benefits. The most important one is that people now can keep in touch with their long-distanced peers or family members. Only by sending text messages and making video calls can they talk, interact and take care of each other in a far distance. Additionally, technology contributes greatly to the improvement of overseas businesses. There are more and more people working for international entrepreneurs just by online tasks and meetings. As a result, relationships among people have evolved into a new level.
On the other hand, the development also leads to some negative effects. The first one is that it has resulted in the fact that people do not usually talk anymore. They just focus on their phones and their virtual friends despite being surrounded by their real friends in cafes or at schools. Moreover, people also hide their true feelings, which afflicts to the breaking up in relationships. They tend to not expose their emotions and always counterfeit their smiles in their social lives. Consequently, friends, partners, and family members are prone to misunderstanding and conflicts.
In conclusion, technology has positively changed the way people interact with each other. In addition to that, the development also has both benefits and drawbacks. Therefore, people should make use of technological tools carefully in order to gain advantages.
- Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 87
- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- The graph below gives information about international migration to the UK, 1999 -2008 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57264957265 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17737270008 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569800569801 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0678160675 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3279244078 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971381501619 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111703103567 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204048770388 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100023048402 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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