From last two decades, modernization and technology advancement brought significant changes in our life, which lead our into a busy one with no time for family and friends. One of the main reason of not getting much time for family/ friends is travelling. In most of the countries people are forced to spent a lot of time on travelling from office to home or home to office. Myriad of people think that government should take necessary action and spend large sum of on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. However, numerous people have opinion that money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
In one hand, when we talk about improving transport facilities between cities, number of people spend many hours just to travel from one city to another. To shorten this period of travelling, many countries have decided to make fastest rail track for the commuters , who wants to travel from Dubai to Abu Dhabi, which could save their two third of travel time.
On the other hand, nevertheless, it is reasonable to say that government's first priority should be, improving existing public transport. We should not ignore the fact a large number of people are using public transport, hence by improving this facility could help to improve their busy pace of life.
In the conclusion, I would like to mention that in order to improve living standard of average citizen, government should first priorities the improvement of local transport. Therefore, you can provide a better life of juvenile and average earning person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the fastest'.
Suggestion: make the fastest
...velling, many countries have decided to make fastest rail track for the commuters , who want...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ake fastest rail track for the commuters , who wants to travel from Dubai to Abu D...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ransport. We should not ignore the fact a large number of people are using public transport, henc...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...izen, government should first priorities the improvement of local transport. Ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07722007722 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6245850616 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6730307292 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328908099353 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126466319582 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141115328745 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174003335381 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119503109597 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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