In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Railway transportation is one of the major transportation in the globe. With connecting the longer distances for carrying the goods and people transport. Constructing new railway lines over the improving the old. People are looking for the faster ways of transporting comparing with aeroplanes and ultrasonic planes this needs the construction of new tracks.
The demand has risen for the transportation to faster ways to reach. In this world the need to be competitive with other emerged industries after the railways. The air travel has become the cheaper and cheaper every year this shifts the people interest towards it. Similarly the advancements in the automobile industry will become challenged to railway. The transportation has been changing rapidly for the advantage of the people by considering speed.
Due to increase of pollution and its environmental effect people should prefer shared transport. In people care for the well-being of planet prefers the railway when it meet with speed of alternatives provides. The increase of rise of temperatures the government need to change the people preference by shifting towards the poll transport like railway, this takes to invest in creating the railways lines for super fast trains. The construction of new railway lines will bring new trains change user choice towards the trains.
For being competitive with other transport types the railway lines need to be constructed for super fast trains. The rise of global warming will increase the importance of shared transportation with less pollution like trains when it reaches expectations of people in terms of speed. When I choose the ways to transport into how time it takes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... shifts the people interest towards it. Similarly the advancements in the automobile indu...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meets'?
Suggestion: meets
...g of planet prefers the railway when it meet with speed of alternatives provides. Th...
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Line 13, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pectations of people in terms of speed. When I choose the ways to transport into how...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, similarly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37078651685 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94800571598 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5959030414 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274170105168 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107400804383 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643203028076 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192593944007 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463575327765 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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