In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is widely argued that the government should spend money on establishing new railways lines which facilitates faster travel, whereas some opine that it should spend on ameliorating the current public transportation. When new railway lines are created, they enable us to get to our work without traffic and hassle, however, the existing transports must be improved in order to avoid deforestation. Let us discuss both the views before drawing concrete decisions.
On the one hand, when the government spends money on the current transport system, it can be completed within a short period of time and people will be benefitted. This also ensures that trees and agricultural lands does not get destroyed due to this advancements. To illustrated this, a recent study done by "Economic times" magazine depicts that the improvements in the buses in Tamilnadu worked efficiently as 80% of the them were satisfied with it.
On the other hand, traffic and the hassles in the roads are irrefutably one of the major concern which can only be prevented by opting for rails. Therefore, if new railway lines are introduced, it will facilitate the commutation between work and home. As a result, the stress and the pressure on an individual can be lowered. For instance, a recent survey conducted by the "Times Now" newspaper shows that 70% of the people travelling to work by trains and 50% of them claims that it made their lives more easier and tension free.
In conclusion, any developments should take place without disturbing the environment. From my perspective, instead of spending on existing systems, the government can introduce new railway lines as it is one of the convenient and comfortable means of transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20640569395 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05259676867 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.517066333 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271494180689 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853897602262 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654246765749 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1523180895 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721385535006 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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