The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generations. What are the reasons for this, and how can the problem be tackled?
Compared to the previous generation, the quality of life is more improved, however, for that reason, the number of overweight people is much higher. Modern life leads to people's sedentary lifestyles, an increase in the demand for processed foods consumption. In this essay, I will discuss two main problems associated with this and put forward some practical solutions.
The first reason why the number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generations is people's sedentary lifestyles. Nowadays, smart appliances are always helpful for people to do anything, for example, when they do housework at home, they have a household appliance, when they work at the office, they have a computer. Therefore, people can get everyday tasks done with hardly any physical effort and they tend to rely on smart appliances. Besides, as life gets busier these days, people seem to not have time for physical activities. The solution to this problem is to take advantage of devices to work more efficiently, balance between work and relax, and take time for doing exercise at least 30 minutes a day.
Another reason is eating processed foods which usually contain ingredients such as saturated fats, added sugar, and salt. These foods also contain less dietary fiber and fewer vitamins than healthy foods. We know this is not far-fetched arguments that processed foods make obese immediately. To tackle this issue, people should consume home-cooked meals.
In conclusion, obesity is an issue that will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. However, I feel that the best way to solve this issue is by doing regular exercise and eating healthy food to support ourselves in suffering diseases.
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- The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generations What are the reasons for this and how can the problem be tackled 84
- The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generations What are the reasons for this and how can the problem be tackled 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, therefore, at least, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66085570094 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1439560277 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343287812225 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113612103835 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120634152444 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177746704205 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789847263863 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.