Nowadays, air pollution is one of the vital issues in many societies which is gotten worse by increasing the number of private cars. In this essay, some major solutions for tackling with current problem along with examples are intended to be discussed.
First of all, government has this responsibility to increase the public transportation system as well as encouraging people to use them instead of using private car. For example, in many developed cities by establishing a new system of public transportation, which is called "Driver", has propelled people to use less private car.
Secondly, some people who work together in a common place, could share their car. By this way, not only they help to reduce polluting air but also they can save money rather than paying for car's fuel and car depreciation.
Finally, these days many automobile companies try to produce vehicle which is environmentally-friendly. In other word, they produce car that is charged by electricity or solar power instead of fossil fuel. The survey in NY, showed that by changing every current car to mentioned car, the air pollution will decrease about 75 percent.
In conclusion, however the number of private cars are increasing, there is some solution that can solve this problem by cooperating people and government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23222748815 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21267592263 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1433828812 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291897302107 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107513317067 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556130077412 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160872143207 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521967655108 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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