Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?
Nowadays shopping through the internet has grown in importance. This situation has some effects on environment and job opportunity that the following essay will discuss about them in details.
The new technology such as online shopping via the internet has some negative and positive environmental and social impacts. Firstly, from the positive aspect, online shopping helps to reduce cutting trees in environment for production of paper. Secondly, it helps that people buy their necessaries without leaving their home and using car, so the air pollution and traffic congestion will become lesser and lesser. Finally, with advent of new technology, people gain better situations to find job. In fact online shopping offers people better job opportunities and solved one of the social problems in many countries.
Online shopping can be caused some problems. With the entrance of the internet and development of online shopping most people in the world have computer, lap top and tablet. Technology is changeable like the fashion world. This position can produce some dangerous electronic wastes such as used computers. These electronic wastes have some hazardous materials which can hurt the environment and they should be disposed by some special methods. The other problem is increasing in the number of mendacious jobs. In online shopping people use their credit cart, because of this subject they are some hackers who misuse the internet and hack the people’s credit number and steal their money. It is natural over the time people lose their trust about online shopping.
In conclusion, most people in the world use the internet for online shopping and this trend is very common between them but as mentioned above like many other subjects online shopping has some negative and positive effects on environment and social situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3724137931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62843682494 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537931034483 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7300191851 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207833025673 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744437697313 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495303899582 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148827139351 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270089581335 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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