For a long time, global sporting events have played a major role in the society but some people still believe that it is a total misuse of financial resources. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the notion as these events actually benefit the society and youngsters.
Commencing the discussion, these events bring people together belonging to two different cultures, nationalities and languages. Moreover, these events bring harmony in the world. However, people learn about the culture of other countries and become acceptable to others. Although, these games are hosted at a large scale. When people travel to different host countries to watch the games they get a chance to interact with people from other countries. As a result, they get to know each other better and some become lifelong friends and form meaningful relationships. Moreover, these events bring revenue in the country as they generate tourism and also provide employment opportunities to the local people. Hence, all these things help people to come together.
On the other hand, these events are a great way to inspire young people to join sports and become physically fit. However, these events motivate the youngsters to work hard and achieve great things in their lives. Moreover, most of the teenagers idolize these sportsmen. By watching them play, they also get inspired and start working hard and become somebody out of nobody. Hence, they stay away from bad habits like drugs.
To conclude it, these global events bring harmony in the world as they bring together people from different cultures on one platform. They also motivate the young people to work hard and stay away from any bad habits.
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- Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than in store shopping Is it a positive or a negative development Give your reasons and examples 67
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people fro using their cars 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hese games are hosted at a large scale. When people travel to different host countri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14909090909 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48950458081 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4775138596 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2941176471 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146802894898 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544649157547 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493791080754 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108884493118 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523998315856 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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