The advent of globalisation has virtually reduced the world to a village where geographical boundaries are becoming irrelevant. Nowadays, many people who work for international companies travel to other corners of the world as part of their work routine. Although these travels can be beneficial for employees, it may affect their family and children negatively. In this essay, I discuss the adverse effects of this issue.
Firstly, parents who have to travel frequently are often left with very little time for their family. Spending quality time with children is very important for parents' mental health so, being separated from children for long intervals leads to increased risks of depression and attachment issues in parents. For instance, a study conducted by Oxford University researchers suggested that individuals who spend more than 4 hours a day with their kids are two times less in danger of depression. Even more, it takes away the daily routine of a family. If parents have to take trips many times a year, they cannot schedule family events regularly and miss many opportunities for family gathering.
Secondly, children, especially the teenagers, feel a lack of connection when their parents are not around for the most part. Clearly, having strong bonds with father and mother plays an important role in children's behaviour. Many psychologists believe that children who lack a warm relationship with one of their parents, will find it difficult to develop healthy relationships in future life. In addition, children need the presence of an adult role model during their formative years. It is essential for their academic as well as emotional development. When parents travel excessively, they fail to spend quality time with their children. Of course, they provide financial security for their children but there is more to parenting than giving children pocket money.
In conclusion, although travelling for work adds up a lot to employees, it affects their family life negatively in many ways, especially if they have children. Not only being away from children raises feelings of anxiety and stress in parents and keeps them away from family routines, but also it deteriorates children's confidence in parents as role models.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32773109244 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80020152994 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582633053221 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2616030683 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371335167256 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123374912958 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859482755682 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246741391547 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453238182025 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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