In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development You should use your own ideas knowledge and

In this competitive world, the human pursuit of knowledge is reaching new heights each day. More and more individuals these days are attempting further studies, especially in the foreign countries. Although there are certain factors that act as hurdles in their path, there are various benefits too that can help achieve their goal.

Firstly, there are only few countries with extraordinary education standards. In particular, western countries such as the USA have some world-class institutions which provide renowned resources for its students. As a result, many people these days are influenced to travel there. For instance, more than one lakh young people migrate from India to the USA and the UK each year to get a degree in bachelors or masters from a range of specialties.

In addition, the job market in these countries is significantly better in many prospects. To exemplify, the USA is called a land of opportunities. Many reputed and innovative organizations took birth here and today they act as a source of jobs and knowledge thereby attracting many future jobseekers.

That being said, there are certain challenges that these people may come across. Firstly, there is a huge difference in the lifestyle, which may impact them emotionally. Secondly, leaving behind the family and friends, moving to a new country to start an independent life may cause depression and a sense of loneliness. Furthermore, some sections of people may not accept these individuals and at times may even pass racist comments.

To sum up, foreign studies have become more common in the modern era, thanks to the emerging growth in science and technology. Despite of few impediments, migrating students have a lot of positives that can shape a better future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, in particular, such as, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2296819788 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90679376408 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5048979327 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868002854647 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243399592061 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290620370248 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498849434278 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384780349006 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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