The consumption of suger-based drinks increasingly popular. People possess more sugar than ever before. This essay will discuss why people are consuming more sugar including addiction and preference and taste of drinks. Also, it will discuss some of the solutions including control of drinking, and make them educated about the harmful effects of sugar which can lead to some health issues.
Suger based drinks make people addicted. Moreover, they are fond of sweets. If they are having lots of sugar from childhood, they need some sweets in their drinks somehow. For example one of my friends drink coca-cola which having above 36% of sugar every day. Even though he knows it is not beneficial for his health, he still drinking as his body demand it. This problem should be mitigated.
However, it can be controlled if a consumer tries to control it. Another solution would be the family member of the consumer should concern them about the negativity of sweets and drinks. Even though it is hard to convince addicted people, but fewer drinks improve their health conditions. For instance, sugar is prominent material for obesity, and consuming more suger-based drinks will leads to some serious health problems. So, people must reduce their drinks which are based on sugar.
To conclude, people are taking more sweets and it growing significantly. they have a problem of addiction and their high volume of prefereces which has to be controlled. People should think about the negative aspect of soda and tries to control them in order to be healthier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lead
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Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1015625 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50720397601 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5952165801 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5555555556 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39279842262 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1261494625 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847441010665 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24313123549 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847012165971 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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