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People drinks more and more sugar based drinks. What is the reason for tgat? What can be done for that?
Consumption of sugar containing drinks such as soft drinks, canned drinks are increasing rapidly day by day. This is because of lifestyle changes, a tendency to consume more fast food, as well as imitation of anchors. There are a number of solutions, which should be implemented to the people along with anchors and production companies.
Firstly, the reason for taking more sugar based drink is due to the changing of lifestyle adopting from modern culture. Nowadays, people are likely to have fast food with soft drinks, which may be convenient to their way of living. S...
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...with anchors and production companies. Firstly, the reason for ta...
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...t and anchors that acted on such a soft drinks promotion. Moreover, sugar based drinks...
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...t drinks regardless of drinking water. There are many effective w...
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...er the consumption. One solution is that health education, or other words instruc...
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...s well as health problems related to the increased intake of sugar. People should...
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...or example, Diabetes Mellitus. By doing this people would reduce consuming such drin...
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...from school or bybthe community basis. In conclusion, having training i...
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...s well as universities would change the persons attitude towards sugar based drinks and...
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...towards sugar based drinks and also the celebrities mentality to the society may alter the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.321022727273 0.247107183377 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.144886363636 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0681818181818 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0369318181818 0.0501214627716 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0170454545455 0.0437548338989 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127840909091 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0539772727273 0.0403226058552 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64109947403 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284090909091 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0681818181818 0.0861772015684 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255681818182 0.021408717616 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0170454545455 0.011925033212 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2079.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.53773584906 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.440251572327 0.374742101984 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305031446541 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201257861635 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135220125786 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64109947403 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.893693771 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.875 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3401787462 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.9375 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.814263465372 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.3781446541 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.52857142857 1.69124875643 150% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343261280966 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0900648201983 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.052660073555 0.0668466124924 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503328039635 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168946289342 0.148594505496 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141644956961 0.134430193775 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704295034058 0.0742795772207 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424037786753 0.324371583561 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0185358030045 0.0638462369009 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249681010809 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518087357973 0.058150111329 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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