Change is the law of nature. It happens for the betterment of the society and the humans living in it. Over the years, the world has witnessed tremendous changes in almost every aspect of life. Be it technology, living standard, education, medical and healthcare facilities, no sector has been untouched by the rapid development. Technology has played a significant role in shaping the modern world and have provided us countless amenities without which survival is impossible these days. However, these facilities come at a cost and one has to work in order to acquire them.
Having said that people these days work tirelessly to buy the luxuries that technology has bestowed upon us. In an attempt to lead a luxurious and comfortable life, people tend to work for long hours and this often results in an imbalance between the personal and professional life of an individual. Heavy industrialization and globalization have resulted in the migration of people to other countries. People generally tend to live better lives afterward with a high standard of living but cultural and moral values are often left behind.
Analyzing the statement further, there are a number of reasons to support my argument. Firstly, migration to other countries leads to cultural exchange and in most cases, people get influenced by the new culture and forget their own culture. Secondly, people generally lose their traditional values when they are over-ambitious and work relentlessly toward their goals. Furthermore, customs and ethical values have taken a hit with the rapid developments in technology. Smartphones, internet, and social media play a significant role in influencing the mindset of a person.
To recapitulate, technology has been a boon as well as a bane in today's times. I am of the firm opinion that technology has helped us in unimaginable ways but at the same time has had a significant impact on our moral values. Individuals must ensure that it does not affect the traditional values adversely. Schools and colleges must inculcate the importance of cultural heritage and moral values. The government must spread awareness and frequent programmes must be organized to ensure that these values stay with us forever.
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 84
- The Graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with Projection Until 2030. 67
- The chart illustrates housing preferences among people who lived in the British cities of London Oxford and Cambridge in the year 2005 79
- The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 75
- By investing in tourism we can earn a lot of revenue and growth in national economy at the same time it damages the local culture What is your opinion 91
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22486772487 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94522396827 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3238339175 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0476190476 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168067863851 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426565130218 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400706841116 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092713838677 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523310651262 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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