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people should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live rather than their own benefits.what extend do you agree or disagree?
Ensuring basic health is a public responsibility in everyone's day-to-day life or having a healthy life style is ones own advantages has evolved as a major topic of controversy. while I agree with the social implication of personal fitness , I believe that every person should retain their health as an individualized interest.
Firstly, only a healthy person can keep up their own body and mind in a straight way . Being healthy is a good quality of life and all people should keep their own health as a personal benefit. For example, attending a sports events, continues daily exercise...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Ensuring basic health is a public respon...
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... basic health is a public responsibility in everyones day-to-day life or having a...
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...volved as a major topic of controversy. while I agree with the social implication of ...
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...e social implication of personal fitness , I believe that every person should reta...
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...health as an individualized interest. Firstly, only a healthy person can kee...
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...son can keep up their own body and mind in a straight way . Being healthy is a good quality of li...
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...heir own body and mind in a straight way . Being healthy is a good quality of life...
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... For example, attending a sports events, continues daily exercise may improve one...
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...e their immunity to the certain diseases . Not only that it would reduces the medi...
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...rtain diseases . Not only that it would reduces the medical expenses and they can utili...
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... national improvisation. In other words, only a healthy person can encourage thei...
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...n better future and social development. However, public health assurance is ...
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...and social development. However, public health assurance is a major respo...
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...ty of every individuals in a community. people should bothered about the health of a f...
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...ed about the health of a family, friends and neighbors. Reduces the chances of ge...
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...educes the chances of getting infections , eradicate the communicable disease is a...
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... For instance, conducting a medical camp,or a monthly check up may help the communi...
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... the early detection of a health problem . All people should look after their own ...
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...nly a healthy people can make a healthy generations for the future of a nation and human we...
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...ive perspective for the personal fitness , then only it would help the individual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18348623853 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9012925705 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483180428135 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8122052614 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27760504021 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11070756435 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894755578511 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186091710789 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362694803527 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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