In modern day, main role of children care is woman because female more sensible person in world. Many of the drawback young student now affair, such as kind illicit, upsurge from the parents ceremony. In this essay I will discuss main reason of the role of parents.
Firstly, main reason of unlawful soar is addiction of the drug, broken family, corruption and dear also lead to increase to the society. Many kin have not aware about friend than hilarious results hear about their young children going on wrong way direction. Technology is also useful in our life but more young student many alley friend on instagram, facebook, tweeter and whatsapp several time pass used in telephone and not achieve the goal life than crime also rise among the society. In new era, own work to join and not time to discuss each other it that time unauthorized survive the world. In 17th-18th century many people joined family and in these generation broken nuclear family. Kin trouble, en-educated and economic issue to children take a wrong way put on leg.
I the side people opinion, perents also care about in your kind, but they also depend on surround environment of friend and they are more time spend on alley he or she also behind the circumstances. Nowaday more attitude or combat each other and revenge the person also lead to break the law.
To conclude, main roles and without hesitated to take care of this children is know as parents also promoted to persuade to work and taught the their children. Parents always show that highlight forecast or true way own their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
... such as kind illicit, upsurge from the parents ceremony. In this essay I will discuss ...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... join and not time to discuss each other it that time unauthorized survive the wo...
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Line 3, column 654, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this generation' or 'these generations'?
Suggestion: this generation; these generations
...entury many people joined family and in these generation broken nuclear family. Kin trouble, en-...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s and without hesitated to take care of this children is know as parents also promot...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...itated to take care of this children is know as parents also promoted to persuade to...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...promoted to persuade to work and taught the their children. Parents always show that high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32534366995 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9402238532 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113933130762 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042385406597 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506825980124 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704997968597 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356863451058 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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