Each society has been determined by its citizens’ features such as age, population and so forth. Nowadays, the number of new generation is more than population of older people in some countries, which is a positive point due to financial affairs. In this essay, the plus point of this aspect will be discussed.
On the one hand, old people is known as treasure for each community because of their experiences. They could be an efficient leader for young generation to advise them and show which ways would be better to catch the destination. Although having old people is necessary regard to mention item, in modern era, young generation does not follow the elders’ advices and they prefer to increase their knowledge throughout book and educational courses. Therefore, the old population is not as important as young generation.
On the other hand, young people plays an important role as human resources in every society. Most adolescent are both mentally and physically prepared for a great number of activities in comparison with elders, the international competition is the clear evidence for this claim. As a result, a lot of countries that have less young people mostly encourage overseas youths to migrate and choose those countries as a destination. Undoubtedly, powerful economics has a straight connection with workforce development so the strong industry, which equals to the young workforce, leads to the more stable economics.
In conclusion, although one of the necessities in each society is probably old generation, I believe the foundation of society is substantial economics and juveniles are the engine of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2786259542 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01071499066 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1196809391 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143359751555 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521258578646 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041461580824 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786366076889 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058258717581 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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