In modern days, young people occupy the majority of the population in many nations. This action is influencing the development of a country by useful. However, in some cases, knowledge associated with the skill to handle social problems is lacked for young adults. In this essay, I will examine this benefit and drawback with examples and represent a conclusion.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that many counties are developing day by day by support of young men and women. The primary reason for believing this is that the economy of a country depends on the workforce that is recovered by new workers. It is also possible to argue that a lot of amount of adolescents create competition among all fields that are key to prosperity. one important illustration is that in a branch of online enterprise, only youthful entrepreneurs are participating and occupying 25% of the economy that is so high percentage for development of a country.
On the other hand, it is argued that many social problems are related to adolescents because tolerance and wilt are lacked during a short time of problems. People often have this opinion because almost young adults cannot control negative emotions and are seduced such immorality actions as a drug, a robbery and a bully. A particularly good example is that research in 2015 shows that the figure of crime as a bully are growing between 15 age and 25 age by a rapid increase, and
85% of these illegal actions happened cause of an accident and the seduction.
In conclusion, Although the rise of young adults is vital for climbing prosperity, many problems that faced social followed this advantage. In my opinion, issues that adults cannot control oneself and participate in crime outweigh the benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day by'.
Suggestion: day by
...claim that many counties are developing day by day by support of young men and women. The pri...
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Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of amounts'.
Suggestion: a lot of amounts
...kers. It is also possible to argue that a lot of amount of adolescents create competition among...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... all fields that are key to prosperity. one important illustration is that in a bra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94966442953 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7897372036 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3869621297 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136360533726 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504235349743 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373774241414 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690558451552 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643887757941 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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