For any country to succeed,it needs educated, well informed and best leaders. Nowadays as population grows, the huge number of young generation increased significantly compared to the older people. OWing to the advancement of the country's economy, young population is much more needed so as older too. However, youths are more focused and may contribute the value towards societies and countries more adequately. In this essay will discuss both the sides of argument and will conclude that what would be more critical part for growing world.
Why adults are more crucial on order to achieve growth of the countries in overall sectors? There are several reasons that younger generations are more vital in such development. First and foremost, they are the key driver that holds cultural behaviours and traditional values and will bring it to the future. Secondly, they are the representative of future as they let new ideas and energy to add to the pool of knowledge. And therefore the economy of the country will enhance more efficiently. In India, as per the world population report shows that the millennials outnumbered the baby boomers and the outcomes from it that India has made great strides in technology and other areas including space exploration. Lastly, they are a way more educated and practical in life than the bulge. They are not only serves their duty as knowledgeable, but they are also contributes the attributed values in different sectors to achieve the nest goal of successful country. The more younger in countries, the more actvie participation in growth of the country.
Meanwhile, Older generations are also responsible for delivering the good values and manners for the betterment of the country as well as society. To lead any country, the experience and skills are required more and baby boomers are the presentable for these. For example, in any country, people choose older as president of the country than younger one due to scarcity of experience in young adults. However,in context of engery efficient, youths are more focused and self-directed than the olders. Because they have the enthusiasm and oable to take any challenge as they love to face the consequences and find solutions from the difficulties.
To conclude the essay, was discussed both positive and negative aspects about the youths and olders. However, new generation may develop more inventions and expands the growth of economy of a country in different ways than the older population. And therefore the younger generations are more beneficial to the society and country than the bulge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , it
For any country to succeed,it needs educated, well informed and best ...
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Message: "needs educated" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'educating' or 'to be educated'.
Suggestion: educating; to be educated
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Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18377088305 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81699961144 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505966587112 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3124016806 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7272727273 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115187783806 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382640204719 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579917029116 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797165252312 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056903994357 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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