With the increasing environmental issues arising nowadays, several nations are attempting to handle drastic ecological concerns best. This essay will discuss some solutions that I personally believe governments and people can all apply to mitigate the current situation.
On the one hand, leaders around the world are the first in line to take effective measures against the two most serious and devastating problems-climate change and global warming. It is the authorities that promulgate new regulations and laws, as well as launching media campaigns about the environmental crisis. This approach will help raise awareness among citizens about certain issues that human beings are facing. Moreover, every individual, especially city dwellers who are the first to suffer from intense pollution, can have a better insight into the consequences of every action they are doing to the surroundings. For instance, owing to strict laws and requirements from the government, Australia has witnessed a considerable decline in nylon bags and plastic products, along with a rise in canvas bags. As a consequence, pollution in Australia so far has been effectively alleviated.
On the one hand, I believe that every person from all social status is a critical factor in determining the future of the Earth and mankind. Consequently, everyone ought to join hands to cut down on the use of disposable products and fossil fuels. It is advisable that people substitute traditional energy with renewable sources of energy such as solar and wind energy, to name but a few. These methods are economical, effective, and directly reduce the number of carbon emissions discharged from factories annually. For example, many Vietnamese teenagers these days prefer using reusable goods to single-use merchandise. Thanks to the environmentally friendly lifestyle of today’s adolescents, the pollution situation in Vietnam has improved significantly. For this reason, I assert that in this day and age, every individual plays a pivotal role in addressing numerous environmental challenges.
In conclusion, the Earth nowadays is facing a number of catastrophic natural disasters due to the industrial activities of human beings. However, I believe that there are numerous practical solutions that every citizen and leader worldwide can get engaged in order to mitigate the situation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59166666667 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10340190679 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630555555556 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4127318085 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.411764706 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126807796182 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334597131473 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266307538428 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633744776562 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271304087225 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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