By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is still controversial whether capital punishment can be justified by executing criminals. Now I will discuss it by arranging both opinions and decide which side I am on.
To commence with opinions in favour of death penalty, it is deemed that criminals with felonious crimes have a tendency to recommit. According to a study with respect to criminals, criminals with minor offences show a higher probability of rehabilitation while it is almost impossible for felonious criminals to rehabilitate. From this perspective, it is undeniable that it is directly linked to the money government spends.
Turning out attention to the opposite opinions, it is world widely accepted that most countries phase out capital punishment. This is because that people's thoughts towards death penalty has been gradually changed that life holds great significance. Another reason is that innocence would be identified afterward in the wake of upgraded forensic investigation. Even decades later, people who were previously falsely charged are often disclosed innocent.
To sum up, it is my contention that the rest of the world where the death penalty exists should embark on the a tendency to phase out the old practice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...e death penalty exists should embark on the a tendency to phase out the old practice....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, to sum up, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3664921466 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02380384776 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670157068063 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7685378952 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136480606077 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439927759833 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496772614384 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634033796732 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531263821741 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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