It is argued that rich countries should accept expert and knowledgeable employees from poor countries. I completely agree with this idea because it is an opportunity for people who come from undeveloped countries to have a better life, and also rich countries could use cheaper trained workers.
People who come from poor countries have a bad effect on culture. Unfortunately, poor countries do not care about cultural development, so the most of communities did not learn the basic skills which are essential for living in a modern community, and it can have a bad effect on the status quo culture of rich countries. But we have talked about knowledgeable and trained people the most of whom are civilized, and also it is harder to reach a level of knowledge in poor countries rather than rich countries. To sum it all up, it is highly unlikely these employees have adverse effects.
People with work competencies need something to save their motivation. When people live in a poor country, it casts a shadow on everything. After a while, they think they are not as good as their co-workers in rich countries. Only does thing save their motivation is to hope to have a better life, So job-migration is the only way to have a better life for them.
Having a trained worker must spend a lot of time and money. The governments must spend money on schools and universities in their countries to have knowledgeable workers and experts, which means it takes a long time and needs budget allocation. Giving this opportunity to skill workers and experts from other poor countries, they can gain a lot of trained workers instantly and without any paying money.
In conclusion, I think it is not fair that knowledgeable people suffer due to their birth country, and also the rich countries can have their workers without paying anything, so it seems both parties gain profit in this situation.
- Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment However others claim that it is good for the economy Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your 78
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- Some people think that children should study in school the subject of science of food and how to prepare it properly Other think it is a waste of time because there are more important subjects to study Discuss both views and give your opinion with reasons 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the communities') or simply say ''most communities''.
Suggestion: most of the communities; most communities
...care about cultural development, so the most of communities did not learn the basic skills which ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86645962733 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80689167414 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493788819876 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6425414357 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310357436614 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116529399438 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108704777944 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185777564653 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135052967515 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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