Scientific research is said to be conducted and managed by the authorities instead of financial independence companies. I partly agree with this statement due to two main reasons: High cost and time requirement.
On the one hand, personal enterprises should not be the ones who take up and follow scientific project since it is costly and time-consuming. National budget is allocated for various aspects such as education, military, healthcare, and so on while the charge for a research is high, so it is not afford for this field. Besides that, purchasing an analysis for a long time and receiving no consequence may trigger an unsatisfaction of citizens, for they might assume that they need the governments to invest on other vital aspects; However, private corporations may have enough time and money to accomplish this.
On the other hand, a research supervised by governments has higher successful rate and guarantee. Some complicated studies require international cooperation, and independent organizations may not be able to complete that. Moreover, scientific research governed by national organization frequently supervised by many professors and experts, hence getting an expected result. For example, during the Covid-19 epidemic period, loads of nations, namely China or America, have tried their best to study and produce the vaccine for residents; As a result, the expansion of the pandemic has been hindered significantly, and people in all walks of life can return to work.
In conclusion, I believe that both the governments and private companies are encourage to join hand to undertake a study in order to save time and achieve better outcomes.
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 78
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults Which view do you agree with Use examples to support your position 73
- Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university to work or to travel Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage 73
- Some people believe that the aging population is good for business the economy and society Other howeve disagree with this view Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ad of financial independence companies. I partly agree with this statement due to...
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Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...lthcare, and so on while the charge for a research is high, so it is not afford for this f...
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Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...ge for a research is high, so it is not afford for this field. Besides that, purchasin...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...fe can return to work. In conclusion, I believe that both the governments and p...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...e governments and private companies are encourage to join hand to undertake a study in or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36259541985 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12632700104 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3102481331 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155910839125 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657826741606 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411015433061 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096668278471 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130295534947 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.