My full name is Tran Phuong Thao. I am 21 years old, and now I am a senior student at Tongmyong University, Busan, Korea. My nuclear family in Vietnam has four members: my parents, my younger brother, and me. My parents are both working as civil servants, and my younger brother is a high school student who studies at the same school as I did. About myself, I already spent a long period living in Can Tho City with my family until I moved to Ho Chi Minh City alone to start my journey on campus for the first and second years at the Ho Chi Minh University of Transport. After finishing my first 2 years in Vietnam, I was transferred to Tongmyong University for the last 2 years in Korea.
To describe myself, I feel I am a confident and consistent person. Once I have a specific objective, I am going to strive for it and rarely sway my points of view as long as I am sure about them. I think those are big factors contributing to some significant achievements I have gained, especially a 100% scholarship for the first semester and a 60% scholarship for 2 consecutive years at Tongmyong University, thanks to my IELTS 7.0. By immigrating to Korea, I have experienced so many things that I never had a chance to try in Vietnam, from traveling to breathtaking landscapes like Kwangalli Beach, Gamcheon Cultural Village, Jalgachi Market, etc. to joining some campus celebrations where I tried on Hanbok and had a visit to Samgwangsa Temple for variously exciting activities. I also have a decent part-time job as a waitress at a Korean pork meat restaurant where I can improve my Korean and learn some good stuff relating to cooking and serving. Besides, that job helps me diminish the financial burden by not relying on my parent's finances anymore, which is my biggest satisfaction during this journey. When I have free time, I tend to listen to music, one of which is Blackpink, my favorite K-pop girl group. I would love to try out Korean foods by heading off to street food areas or Korean buffet restaurants with my buddies. I either practice some helpful hobbies such as reading books or watching English movies and YouTube videos about my impressive topics to pick up some funny things and even knowledge.
Currently, I am interested in knowledge about investment, so I am reading "The Warren Buffett Way, written by Robert G. Hagstrom, to understand some basic foundations about this topic. Complementing some books about my logistics major like "Multimodal Transport, written by Assoc. Prof. Dr. Ho Thi Thu Hoa (who is also my lecturer in Vietnam), that I have finished reading during my summer holiday, as well as "Logistics Management and Strategy, by Alan Harrison, Heather Skipworth, Remko I. Van Hoek, and James Aitken, that I am reading at the moment, I am planning to become a logistics investor in the future. I know this is not an easy goal to achieve, but I will try my best to fulfill my dream. I was digging more into recruitment websites looking for full-time job requirements and will apply right after graduation. For me, this internship course creates a lot of opportunities to visit logistics enterprises, ports, and terminals. I really want to reach out to the CEO of TBD or successful people in this field to get to know their career paths and learn some lessons for myself. I am going to exploit as much experience as I can during this course so that I can obtain a realistic view of my sector and bring myself closer to my goals.
- 5 The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mai
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010 78
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 81
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 78
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, really, second, so, well, i feel, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 24.0651302605 337% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2865.0 1615.20841683 177% => OK
No of words: 612.0 315.596192385 194% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68137254902 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84541406469 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 335.0 176.041082164 190% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547385620915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 885.6 506.74238477 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 5.43587174349 478% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7426523859 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.48 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00598353794845 0.244688304435 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00250458061877 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0122698890713 0.0667982634062 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00427047049542 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00603935729234 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 78.4519038076 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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