Nowadays, people around the world have communicated, fast and easy, through the technology revelation. Social media is exerted by various generations. Information sharing on the internet is involved with a level of security risks. Despite it has some disadvantages, I believe that the advantages like job opportunity and be in touch with customers are overcome. This essay will elaborate both cons and pro thus it will lead to logical conclusion.
Firstly, social media has crucial impact on find the professional network. Many employers have found their employee on internet, who are the best skill match with job positions. For instant people can present their experts in public then employers are able to choose them in some common applications such as LinkedIn and Facebook. Secondly, it has hugely positive impacts of regularly communications in order it is cheap and simple. For example, people can send feedbacks and share their experience with producers and other customers.
On the other hand, there is some kind of crime that it is particularly for this area such as Cyber hacking. As illustration if somebody can access in personal information, they are able to hack bank accounts or even they do extortion. Child bulling is another kind of crime that could happened in this area simply because there are many fake account owners who would make uncontrolled connection with kids.
In conclusion, although always there are a risk of abuse the new technology using like Cyber hacking or bulling, its benefits like getting job opportunities and communications developing are completely over weight. I believe gradually people pay more attention to the social media benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16182572614 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8229066917 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643153526971 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0601576792 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160020491846 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611543454289 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970035006445 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863228149331 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531511897807 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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