It is generally believed that the formation of society stems from the set of rules and regulations, and this concept would not exist if the members of societies were given freedom in their actions and behaviours. I completely agree with this assertions, and this essay will provide the explanation for the reason behind my opinion.
There are certain unwritten laws within every community that should be followed and respected by its participants. Examples of such laws include showing respect to the elderly. If a person fails to satisfy this obligation, then he no longer becomes a part of the society. Ultimetaly, the society may get entirely destroyed if the number of lawbreakers increases substantially. Consequently, this may lead to a social chaos where everybody acts the way they like, and grandparents are not revered anymore. Therefore, people should be encouraged to act and behave according to the laws of the society.
Furthermore, some societies may involve traditional rituals that need to be partaken and performed by the individuals. These traditional events are regarded as divine, and not pariticipating in them may profoundly hurt the feelings of other members of society and result in disillusionment. In order to avoid making people upset and belittling the importance of the gatherings, a person ought to contribute to the cultural performances. Thus, for the society to function properly, all its members should be encouraged to value and make contributions for its prosperity.
In conclusion, rules and laws are paramount in every society. I do believe that socieities would lose their true importance if people stopped following such regulations, and it is always best to stive to make one's society flourish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32608695652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12305389939 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3411472725 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13638853902 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430362156351 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305050611378 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826270485576 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027397469795 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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