Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that if total ban is imposed on all varities of advertisements then it would beadvantageous for the society. I completely disagree with this notion and think that banning the advertisements cannot be beneficial for the nation.
Firstly, commercials keep the people updated regarding numerous things. Everyday new items launched in the market so these adds help the customer to know about the pros and cons of consuming that things. Moreover, it provides them opportunities to differentiate between several things whether they are beneficial for them or not. For instance , the loreal shampoo claims of using different hair products according to the type of condition of hair,hence it provides the perspective to consumers which one will be suitable for their hair.Even, it awares the people from the dangerous side effects of some items. In this way, advertisements help in keeping the persons up to date about the products ,their benefits and also their adverse affects.
Secondly, it boosts up the economy of the country and the company manufacturing products. As commercials provides the platform to many sellers to promote their things and attract the consumers . For instance, spices like MDH ,well known for their spices are in great demand today because of their quality and claims the guarantee of good taste. So, commercials are good source of generating money and increase productivity.
To coclude, I strongly believe that advertisements are really fruitful because they keep the people up-to-date and also enhance the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35102040816 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9429661923 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4303061326 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101660102694 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389416294721 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630510456263 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763316637054 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917129604755 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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