In some countries a major part of the residents becoming fat and lost their appropriate weight. There are some causes and solutions for this fact that I want to discuss in the following essay.
Nowadays, a wide range of people have faced with lackage of time. The question is why people feeling shortage of time while it is merely a human-made concept. It seems that a wide range of nations have forget the bond among being busy and the feeling about time, which can cause to stress. In another words, when an individual thoughts that he is busy and doesn't have time, it would inevitably results to stress, primary reason of unhealthiness. On the other hand, in the last century we have experienced big changes in our diet. New models of food-consumption, eating fast-foods, has became increasingly popular. The more a person eats junk-foods, the more he confronts with disease.
There are some debates over this issue, while two offered methods seems to be convenience. The first solution might be reducing tension and stress. Some experts suggest that doing sports is the easiest path due to acheiving mental health. Secondly, some people think that the government could play a crucial role in this matter by setting some regulations on consumption of fast-foods. However, as far as I am concerned, I want to argue that inventing new method for eating would be more beneficial rather than being dependant on regulation. Moreover, creative-thinkers in food industry may spend time on introducing new types of foods instead of fast foods.
In conclusion, there is an undeniable deed that the average weight climbs as we have busy, stressful days as well as unsuitable diets. It seems that doing exercise and using new methods of food-consumption would allow us to gain an appropriate condition in this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...seems that a wide range of nations have forget the bond among being busy and the feeli...
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Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stressing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: stressing
...the feeling about time, which can cause to stress. In another words, when an individual t...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thought'?
Suggestion: thought
...s. In another words, when an individual thoughts that he is busy and doesnt have time, i...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...individual thoughts that he is busy and doesnt have time, it would inevitably results ...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...d doesnt have time, it would inevitably results to stress, primary reason of unhealthin...
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Line 2, column 585, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ood-consumption, eating fast-foods, has became increasingly popular. The more a person...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...ld be more beneficial rather than being dependant on regulation. Moreover, creative-think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8782587605 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7217673583 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152726028763 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475064100819 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410834249872 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953982690519 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458536687074 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.