In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Nowadays, it can be seen that an increasing population has been suffering from obesity and their health conditions are getting worse due to unhealthy eating habits and sedentary lifestyle. To my mind, both the government and individuals need to pay attention to and take actions to solve the problem.
To begin with, people are gaining weight because they have been eating too much fast food with insufficient exercise. From an eating perspective, there have been various fast-food restaurants all over the world in which the food prices are cheaper, the products are mouthwatering, and the waiting time is shorter. All of those advantages of fast food attract customers to eat deep-fried and oily food more often. From an exercising perspective, people, especially the younger generation, can spend hours in front of a screen for working, studying or even playing games without standing up. Having more high-calorie food but moving less to burn the energy are the main reasons why people are getting fatter and fatter.
As an optimist, I believe people can become thinner and healthier with the guide from the government and with self-effort. The government may enact new laws that fast companies need to pay extra tax for the products and force them to increase the price. At the same time, the government budget needs to be allocated to a subsidy for healthy food so that the price would be lower. More costumers would like to have a healthier diet when they pay less for healthy food and more for junk food. Apart from the measures taken by the government, people need to learn about the dangers of obesity and the diseases it can cause, such as heart attack, high blood pleasure and diabetes. Individuals also need to do more exercise or just simply stretch their legs after sitting in front of laptops every hour.
In conclusion, the government and people need to be alert about the trend of high average weight and take measures to stop or reverse it for healthy intentions. I think people can keep fit by eating healthier and do more exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, apart from, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93390804598 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59011677628 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554597701149 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6029961286 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.466666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127531578902 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488174035828 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435122594389 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102489236906 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602621879154 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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