In the contemporary days, it is not wrong to say we are spending time for businesses rather than our lives. It has been proven by the rise in people average weight and shrink in health and fitness. This essay will present some main reasons for this issue and suggest appropriate solutions to resolve.
In terms of causes, there are several factors contributing to our weight and health. Firstly, we are staying in the time when people are too busy by their work, so they can hardly do expected exercises in order to control their weight or health because of the fatigue after their work schedule finished. Secondly, foods and drinks with too many sugars & calories spreading all over the market can attract people, especially young students to devour. As a result, the imbalance in our daily nutrition could lead to the fact that we are fatter and unhealthier than before.
As far as I concern the root of problem, some measures will be pointed out to lessen the effects. Everyone should give themselves duration for physical activities beside the time for working or studying and be determined to maintain this habit every single day. No matter how exhausted and stressful they are, they will seemingly feel released after doing workouts. Furthermore, setting up a healthy nutrition schedule and following it should also be considered in the list, which helps them not only stay fitness but also avoid some health issues in the long-term such as: cardio-vascular diseases or diabetes due to sugary abuses.
In conclusion, this matter is resulted by the evolvement of society in perspectives of time limits and nutrition that can be solved by people awareness and suitable time divisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99645390071 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63269143484 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7714950195 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.416666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186114400184 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629909081651 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522086401581 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998996823207 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223270511482 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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