People in some countries consider owing theirbown house is more significant than renting a house. Living in self-owned house is more comfortable and gives feeling of stability and security. In my opinion, it has positive and negative sides depend on many factors.
On the one hand, having a own house gives mare advantages. Firstly, people feel more comfortable. Moreover, people can decorate their own style or taste. People in their home spend their money more freely, according to their other necessities rather than pay money for renting. The main importance of living own house which provides good future which people expect to appropriate in value in future.
As far as, negative sides of living in apartment, one of the amin aspect is that pay money each month for renting which is more difficult. Thus, most of middle-class people who can not afford to purchase house. Most people live in cities' apartmentwith rents and they are not capable of buying house. Furtheremore, other payments such as the electracity and maintence costs get added to their everyday expanses.
To conclude, owing a house is more convinent and desirable, but there are some negatives of buying house for middle-class people and they prefer renting house rather than to purchase house with much money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12857142857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6519534579 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9918278891 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213781181624 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755912684414 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617847883051 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140919100375 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257000560003 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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