It is true that in modern time, many people are prefer buying a house than renting a place. There are several reasons for this trend, and I would argued that it is very beneficial for society in the long run.
Owning a house has become more prevalent than ever before in the modern day. Firstly, home owners can design and decorate as they see fit. As a result, this will give them the ability to design their home and buy furniture as they see fit, and encourage them to own a house. Secondly, a house can provide better privacy. People can not invade your place of living unless they have your permission to enter the premise. For instance, in the US, mainly Texas state, if a person trespassing a home owner house, he is able to use any mean necessary to defend himself. Finally, a stable place of living can help with couple in raising their kins. Most newly wed or married couple opt for owning a property than renting a house, a flat or an apartment. This is mainly for the development of the child, a better environment and a nice community around the area. Hence, greatly improve the lives of the children.
With many people currently owned a home or want to own one in the future. This is a positive situation as a whole. As people choose to own a home, they leave a lot of vacant room for people who are not as fortunate as them. This could help homeless people to have a place to stay for the night without the fear of getting mug or rob at night. Hence, giving them a place to rest and recouperate themselves until they can get back on their feet, and reintergrated back into the society. For example, in the US, there is a place for homeless people to stay overnight such as church where the pastor allowed homeless people to stay the night with no charge.
In conclusion, there are several reasons for people to choose owning a house more than renting one and I believe that this is a good and positive situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ying a house than renting a place. There are several reasons for this trend, and ...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'argue'
Suggestion: argue
...ral reasons for this trend, and I would argued that it is very beneficial for society ...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to own'.
Suggestion: to own
...re several reasons for people to choose owning a house more than renting one and I bel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41456582633 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32336689382 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501400560224 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0010106922 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9473684211 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280009531081 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940422251022 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805699542839 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204906243262 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491641471625 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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