in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for many people.
why is this a case?
Do you think it is a negative or positive situation?
People in some countries nowadays regard owning a home to be more significant than renting one. This essay will discuss the underlying reasons for this preference and elaborate on why it is a negative development.
There are two reasons for people’s preference for homeownership. To begin with, for some people, buying a house or an apartment means that they do not have to waste time on accommodation hunting when a rental contract expires. Therefore, they can be able to focus on the other important things such as marriage’s life. Second, these days a lot of people tend to buy a house with a mortgage since they know the exact amount of money they owe and also the regular amount they have to pay. This allows people to draw out a long-term financial plan in the future. However, this is not the case when they rent a house because they are subject to changes in the rental price made by landlords.
The tendency that many folks value homeownership over rented accommodation is negative because of the following reasons. Most houses or apartments have a very low liquidity which means they could not be easily exchanged by cash. As a result, people who are still redeeming their mortgages may not be able to spend money on the other important investments. Besides, while a tenant can easily terminate their rental contract if they are not satisfied with their current accommodation, it is very difficult for a homeowner to do the same. In other words, once a person made an unwise decision about buying a house that they later regret. They usually left with two options: either make the house available for rent or accept to live with a place they are not happy with.
In conclusion, many people in some countries prefer buying their own houses because they value the stability that owning a home provides and want to have clear future plans. However, unless the thorough considerations are made, homeowners may have to face some undesirable outcomes from such a decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85250737463 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68654972912 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1810845965 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244412010617 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886345307022 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773417155843 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187537538769 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101720410356 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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