In some nations the ownership of a house plays a crucial role in well-being than rent one/ The root cause of this trend are positive feelings that self-owned hove gives such as a sense of stability, comfort and security. From my point of view, this is a positive tendency, my explanations will be examined in this essay.
To begin with, having its own property is believed to be a strong symbol of stability. This is because own accommodation it is not only a place to live no matter what life circumstances could be but also a worth asset which might be a profitable investment. For this reason, in many Asian countries, residents in general aim to invest their money in one or several properties for residence and further realization either rental or resale. Furthermore, living in an own place would mean the lack of annoying landlords who tends to always are directly responsible for the comfort and condition of life of their tenants. For instance, rent price or strict accommodation rules - just several things which may affect a tenant's life and their comfort. Besides, a high level of comfort may be achieved if a self-owned home would be renovated and designed based on its own desire that in most cases are prohibited in rented buildings. It is therefore clear that living in own home rather than in renting probably may become a desired place to live.
However, although homeownership gives rise to extra spending and put a strain on a family budget in the form of extra payment of the electricity, maintenance costs, property taxes and insurance, it has positive development in a long-term perspective. What I mean by this, in order to have their own house, people appear to would work harder boosting the local economy. That is to say, people probably would be encouraged to take a loan that in turn may enrich local budget. Moreover, the growing demand for purchasing houses may enhance constructions and development of the infrastructure. Therefore, ownership brings about the allocation of public money to improve residential areas using money from buying properties.
In conclusion, living in own house provide positive sensation such as stability and comfort, that can be inspired reason to have ownership. In my opinion, this is a positive trend in long-time prospective for residential areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 714, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tenants'' or 'tenant's'?
Suggestion: tenants'; tenant's
... just several things which may affect a tenants life and their comfort. Besides, a high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in general, such as, in most cases, in my opinion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00259067358 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91109785402 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569948186528 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.595164717 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4375 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30136479611 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949504968092 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580482101225 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182788539871 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659876630017 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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