It is apparent that some people work hard while others prefer not to push themselves beyond a certain limit. There are compelling reasons for these different attitudes to work. Passion work is a desirable quality in an employee, but too much hard work can be counter-productive and unhealthy.
There are two valid reasons which motivate people to work hard. First, in 15 years recently, people tend to maintain a Materialism life. These days, humans not only satisfy the needs of food, clothing, and accommodation but also eat well, wear beautiful clothes, and live a luxurious and affluent life. Therefore, some people have to work extra shifts to earn more money. They believe that with the extra income earned, they can buy comforts for themselves and their families. Besides, the mass workload is the second reason why people take much time in companies. Researches suggest that typical laborers who spend at least 8 hours per day employing have to take from 2 to 3 hours could terminate all missions. As a result, employers might extend the working hours to complete the tasks.
However, people who work hard usually encounter serious problems at the workplace and home. First, people doing long shifts are more prone to commit mistakes due to work pressure. As a result, they make a tremendous loss to the corporation they work for and lose jobs. Also, sometimes because of working overtime, laborers do not have much time to keep an eye on their families. Consequently, arguments may arise between partners creating trouble in their relationship. Moreover, many studies have shown that there is an increase in the number of people suffering from stress disorders and other neurological illnesses due to extensive working hours.
To conclude, it is evident that hard work adheres people to conquer their career goals and earn more money. However, working hard neglecting one’s health and family is never a risk worth taking.
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- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
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- Some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree Discuss both the views and provide your opinion 78
- A large number of people think that nowadays women should not work hard to earn their living they should spend more time in caring for their families To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, at least, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08805031447 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64722352915 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4714838168 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1578947368 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225806050001 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712504657437 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451177725875 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135671754319 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395870882539 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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