Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
It is true that a variety of parents purchase a great deal of toys for their kids. To buy children toys, Not only does it help children establish their positive ego playing with the toys but also it has a negative influence on children. This back ground inevitably leads people to controversy wherein stand advantages and disadvantages regarding this issue. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, a number of parents buy playthings for children to help them the formation of good character. For example, with stimulating the toys, they can improve their ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268456375839 0.247107548796 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.140939597315 0.15552993741 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738255033557 0.0946569551029 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0302013422819 0.0501201869031 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0838926174497 0.0437536398559 192% => Too many pronouns. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.120805369128 0.122223957237 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0268456375839 0.0403219363162 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7839646436 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234899328859 0.0326786765898 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0906040268456 0.0861751148067 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010067114094 0.0214082191602 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134228187919 0.0119246538136 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1564.0 1933.38276553 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 316.052104208 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90188679245 6.10592293882 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20519365927 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310606060606 0.37474360046 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.284197041944 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189393939394 0.203843217982 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117424242424 0.137313986986 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7839646436 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.560935902166 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.3958748846 60.7401812628 96% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0911823647 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 20.7725350517 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3166951105 49.5273876611 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3714285714 93.4120437189 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0857142857 15.2821509519 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.594174754866 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01102204409 0% => OK
Readability: 41.5 49.1922392462 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.63157894737 1.69127372897 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.375895425842 0.332604825255 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0766756447888 0.102734651613 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0799702523891 0.0668474354756 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.445920162419 0.534917948617 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130460085977 0.148666948902 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132229644435 0.13441755203 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758196204482 0.0742828286743 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335651260014 0.324241079732 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0879565741444 0.0640056729886 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258891726254 0.22793763319 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507184020201 0.0582452615562 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41883767535 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.88977955912 136% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.493987976 114% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9