some people become famous in their early age. what are the advantages and disadvantages?
We live in an age when contemporary standards allow people to obtain fame in their early age. This essay will discuss both drawbacks and advantages of starting career as a celebrity in early ages.
Generally, there are some factors that enable adolescents to be famous. To start. Internet plays vital role in this situation as it is accessible to everyone. According to statistics, number of teenagers who are trying to be internet influencer has increased tremendously which is the representative of expansive internet. However, being famous in early age could have some negative consequences.
Starting with advantages, famous teenagers can be perceived as an ideal personality. In my honest opinion, well-known kids play motivation figure for those who lack encouragement and self-confidence. In addition, in some countries like Turkey, Azerbaijan, parents do not support the idea of being celebrity in early age because they are afraid of their children facing challenges and serious issues. However, increasing number of famous children can make parents think the different way.
After considering all the advantages, earning huge amount of money in early age can generates some problems. It might seem that celebrities follow comfortable and healthy life style; however, they spend their money for negative purposes which would result in indispensable and dangerous situations. For instance, over past few years, so many young mumble rappers suffered from dangerous addictions such as illegal drugs or overdrinking alcoholic liquors, so these kinds of activities have huge impact on underaged children. In today’s world large majority of children arrange their future plans based on properties such as expensive cars or mansions that celebrities possess which is not necessarily important.
To summarize, in spite of advantages, mentioned before, disadvantages outweigh advantages because not only money and reputation fame come up with but also problems and even death.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'generate'
Suggestion: generate
...g huge amount of money in early age can generates some problems. It might seem that celeb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68333333333 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04652078425 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3972120482 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271094224055 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810675413918 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833035872748 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141889328805 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651960590433 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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