Nowadays advertisement plays a indispensable role for every multinational company to up lift the sale of their stuffs along with it is also informative whereas other people do not think so they opine that it has many negative impact on society together with companies are rising their product selling rate by advertising them. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, in this present time companies are giving more priority to advertise their product because for them advertisement become a primary need Although it help to rise the sales of their products and a this is illustrated by companies who were taking help of advertisement to convey the awareness regrading to their stuffs in other words if people not know about what company is selling then they are not going to purchase the product because they are aware of it what new company launch, in other other words advertisement act as a linker between consumer and companies. Moreover, in many ways advertisements are informative such as, they display the qualities along with features of product and also the glimpse of hoe to use the product these things helps a lot in analysis of product before purchasing somehow advertisement are beneficial and a good illustration of this is there are many costumer who buy the product without knowing any thing about the product and thereafter they regret on their decision.
On the other hand, advertisement have some loopholes also such as, it misguide and encourage the purchaser to pick up their product by showing them pros of product for instance their are many un brand companies who revel the false amenities of their product and after sell service to purpose of increasing price and when the consumer purchased the product they not provide good service as well as the amenities was also inaccurate they only create rumor to sell their product in good price.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with advertisement because sometimes they display unsuitable information for purpose of profit and this is immoral to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... time companies are giving more priority to advertise their product because for t...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ement become a primary need Although it help to rise the sales of their products and...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'a' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: a; this
...to rise the sales of their products and a this is illustrated by companies who were ta...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: other
...aware of it what new company launch, in other other words advertisement act as a linker bet...
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Line 3, column 903, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'costumers', 'costumes'?
Suggestion: costumers; costumes
... illustration of this is there are many costumer who buy the product without knowing any...
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Line 3, column 948, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...mer who buy the product without knowing any thing about the product and thereafter they r...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'misguides'?
Suggestion: misguides
...nt have some loopholes also such as, it misguide and encourage the purchaser to pick up ...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...owing them pros of product for instance their are many un brand companies who revel t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04310344828 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76932042548 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.278193957 49.4020404114 353% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.5 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 20.7667163134 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.8333333333 7.06120827912 338% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15096826229 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770384929529 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421095285791 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938819562 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251867384046 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.0946893788 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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