There is an argument that children should not be allowed to decide their choices about personal matters as it will only make them self-centered and egocentric, where others opine that children should be let to decide their own choices. I completely agree with the second view where children have to be permitted to pick their own choices.
On the one hand, there is a belief that allowing children to choose their own choices will make them to be self-absorbed and egocentric person, thus they should not be allowed to do so. Actually this is reasonable, because all humans are basically self-centered, so there will be tendency for children to always pick a choice that is beneficial for them. This will turn them into someone with self-absorbed personality trait. For example, there is a guy named Don. Since Don was still a child, his parents never require him to ask for their consent in deciding his personal life choices. As a result, Don often choosing choices that are only profitable for him, without considering others' interest, and this habit has turned him into egocentric child. However, it is still acceptable to allow children to choose their own choices because people's basic tendency to be self centered can be minimized if children are monitored and guided correctly when deciding their own choices.
On the other hand, some people opine that allowing children to pick their own choices is important, and will have significant impact to their growth. This is because, by familiarizing children to decide their own personal matters, with their parents' consent, they will learn to be independent and mature since their young age. Moreover, independence and maturity are not something that can be learnt overnight, so teaching them from early age is a good way. For example, a guy named Dean has been taught to choose his own choices since young age, and with his parents' approval. As a result, Dean has been used to be independent by deciding small personal matters. When he finally become an adult, he can be independent and mature guy who knows how to decide something correctly.
In conclusion, allowing children to choose their own choices will make them to be self-absorbed and egocentric person because humans are basically self-centered, so there will be tendency for children to always pick a choice that is beneficial for them. However, the tendency to be self centered can be minimized if children are monitored and guided correctly when deciding their own choices. If monitored and guided correctly, allowing children to choose their own choices will teach them to be independent and mature human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to overnight'
Suggestion: to overnight
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 13.1623246493 281% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05963302752 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70984855393 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.396788990826 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0787315274 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.555555556 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249245649534 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106258134439 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923291568388 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19794862427 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265134389882 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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