Nowadays some individual think that providing freedom to children for making their own life decision and choices regarding their everyday lifestyle such as food,clothing and entertainment can make the pupils selfish while other adore the ideology that every child must get right to make their own life choices which can be affective for them. This essay will discuss the both point of view and provide an opinion before giving a particular conclusion.
In the one hand, Everybody in this word holds their own choices towards their likes and dislike and they must get chances to take it for themselves during their lifetime.However,people think children should not get that freedom to make their decision towards their lifestyle. People believe pupils can become selfish if they get freedom since their early age. They may not consider toward others problems but only focus in their own comfort. It can me a major drawbacks for them in coming future.While, they may also face difficulties while making carrier choices and tend to harm themselves by involving in bad things such as drug, smoke or alcohol. Some face face problem of depression.
In the other hand, some argue that getting the chance of making decision of own makes child more confident and smart. It will help them to tackle all the problems by themselves when they get chance to do whatever they like.They can be independent in an early age and handle all the things of their life. Even they can help their families or societies while making bigger decision of life.To illustrate clearly, through my own experience when i was a child my mother used to allow me to cook because it was my interest since childhood and now i am a best chef of my house. It built up my self confident toward cooking. For instance, getting chances of doing whatever we want can be beneficial for children because it can always make them motivated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92834890966 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67370675204 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523364485981 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.5854625311 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303680265651 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109143082106 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100230750402 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227200423804 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766722737342 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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