“Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that?”
The issue of death penalty has been a subject of heated discussion due to its controversial character. While most of the civilized countries have put an end to this barbaric punishment in their legislations, quite a few nations, including economically prosperous, hold on to various forms of execution, with a growing proportion of the public advocating this measure.
The idea of eradicating capital punishment from modern legal practices appeals to me for a number of reasons. First and foremost, both criminal investigation and court proceedings are carried out by humans, and humans are prone to committing errors, in other words, “to err is human”. In view of this argument, the question arises how many innocent people can be murdered “by mistake” to punish the one who “deserves” it? Unfortunately, there have been such precedents, leaving the public and legal community in a state of turmoil.
However, it is perfectly comprehensible why the idea of depriving confirmed criminals of life is met with a wide support. Firstly, certain members of the public truly believe in the act of revenge, when the only adequate retribution for those guilty of sexual child abuse, or acts or terrorism with massive victims, is death. Another common misconception is that the implementation of capital punishment can serve as a deterrent, making life in the country more secure. In line with my conviction, however, both of these approaches are wrong, as there are no straightforward measures to curb severe crime.
To conclude, although there have always been a great deal of opposition to the ban or moratorium on death penalty, I am convinced this instrument is no answer to increasing crime rates. Not willing to be accused of leniency to criminals, I believe in their strict isolation from the society, and creating equal opportunities for everyone.
- Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- In the past shopping was a routine domestic task Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby To what extent do you think this is a positive trend 56
- Some people prefer doing the same things all the time Others however think that changes are necessary Discuss both points of view and give your opinion 56
- Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people prefer doing the same things all the time Others however think that changes are necessary Discuss both points of view and give your opinion 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2508361204 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12917320147 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1536727927 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.833333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125507801605 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404783046743 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334773221232 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663882651805 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247081744662 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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